Category Archives: Progress report

Nearing the end of the first round of rewrites

First round of edits Mid-February our editor, Anne Sowards, returned Confluence with marked up with comments and suggestions for revisions. Sherylyn and I talked through the main changes she suggested—storylines to cut/add, suggestions for improvements—and agreed on the basic changes we planned to make. Then we started work.  Sherylyn went through the story and added…